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I've been this way for a while,
My heart is so fragile now,
One more break and I'm done,
The emptiness will swallow me,
I will cease to be,
Just a hollow shell of who I once was,
I need for this so badly to work,
I need you,
I need everything that you bring into my life,
Make this pain recede,
Please just set me free,
Just love me.
Blah.
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AfroPear Oct 22, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Beautiful. Hauntingly so. I completely connect with this.
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SaiyuriSora01 Oct 25, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :) I try.
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AfroPear Oct 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You succeed :)
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SaiyuriSora01 Oct 29, 2012  Student Writer
Possibly. lol
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AfroPear Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Lol. Definitely :)
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SaiyuriSora01 Nov 1, 2012  Student Writer
:D
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Beautiful work! I like the ending. After all, isn't that what we all need? Still the "hollow shell" remains.
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SaiyuriSora01 Sep 19, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks :)
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MentallyBoundRonin Sep 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Very good, tons of emotion here, I can even relate a little. Good to get those thoughts out. I am glad to see you write!! =)
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SaiyuriSora01 Sep 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thanks, it's been a while since I wrote something. I'm glad you can relate to it. :/
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